Meteor garden
At the early hour of 4o'clock,
Daydreamers dread for a place
A place called meteor garden,
Why is it called the meteor garden,some may ask.
The answer lies in the black hellebores
Flowers that encapsulate an enigma,
Similar to what the heavenly bodies hold.
With the break of dawn,
These blossoms appear normal as ever
But in the ungodly hour of the night,
They become an outworldly respite.
Written by: Vanshika Mukherjee
Illustration by: Vanshika Mukherjee
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